SCHOOL HOLIDAY WORKSHOP YEARS 9–10

Help Your Child Write Better Essays — in Just 2 Hours.

A practical, teacher-led workshop that shows students how to understand essay questions, build a clear argument, structure strong paragraphs and analyse evidence instead of simply retelling.

2 Hours Small Group Workbook Included Individual Feedback
Qualified high-school teacher
10+ years classroom experience
BEST FIRST STEP
ESSAY WRITING KICKSTART Limited places
ONLY
$49
per student
THE COACHMATE ESSAY METHOD
UNDERSTAND PLAN ARGUE ANALYSE WRITE IMPROVE
2 hrsFocused teaching
6–8Small-group cap
1Clear writing system
DOES THIS SOUND FAMILIAR?

Your child has ideas — but struggles to turn them into a strong essay.

Many students do not need “more work”. They need a clear method that shows them exactly what to do, step by step.

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They don't know how to start.

The blank page becomes the hardest part.

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Their ideas are there — but the structure isn't.

They know the topic, but their paragraphs feel unclear or disorganised.

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They use quotes without really analysing them.

Evidence gets inserted, but the explanation stops too early.

They retell instead of explain.

Teachers write “analyse more”, but students often do not know what that means.

IN 2 HOURS

Four skills that make essay writing feel much clearer.

Students practise the skills — they do not just listen to explanations.

01

Understand the question

Know exactly what the essay question is asking.

02

Build a clear argument

Know what you want to prove before you begin writing.

03

Structure a strong paragraph

Organise ideas, evidence and explanation in a clear order.

04

Analyse evidence

Explain meaning and effect instead of simply retelling.

WHAT'S INCLUDED

More than a lesson. A complete mini learning experience.

Everything is designed to help students understand, practise and leave with a clearer next step.

120

2-hour live workshop

Focused teaching, modelling and practice.

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Coachmate workbook

A structured workbook students can keep and reuse.

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Small-group support

Enough time for questions, guidance and individual attention.

Individual feedback

A clear strength and next step for each student.

Essay Mastery Method

A repeatable system students can use again at school.

Progress check

Students finish by showing what they can now do independently.

HOW THE 2 HOURS WORK

Simple. Practical. Always moving toward stronger writing.

0–30
MINUTES

Understand + Argue

Break down the question and build a clear thesis.

30–60
MINUTES

Plan + Structure

Turn the argument into a simple essay map and strong paragraph structure.

60–90
MINUTES

Evidence + Analysis

Choose useful evidence and explain what it actually shows.

90–120
MINUTES

Write + Improve

Students apply the method, improve a response and receive feedback.

THE COACHMATE ESSAY MASTERY METHOD

A writing process students can remember.

UNDERSTAND PLAN ARGUE ANALYSE WRITE IMPROVE
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TAUGHT BY

Stephen

Founder, Coachmate

10+Years classroom experience
MTeachMaster of Teaching
Y7–12High-school specialist
MEET YOUR TEACHER

Clear explanations from someone who understands the classroom.

Coachmate was created to give students the practical explanations, structure and feedback that can be difficult to get in a busy classroom.

The workshop is deliberately hands-on. Students see a model, practise the skill, apply it themselves and then improve their work.

✓ Qualified high-school teacher ✓ 10+ years classroom experience ✓ Simple, scaffolded teaching ✓ Practical school-based writing skills
WHY PARENTS CHOOSE COACHMATE

Clear teaching. Visible progress.

★★★★★
“Stephen has been incredible for our son. His confidence in English has grown so much, and his essays are now well-structured and clear. His marks improved from a C to an A in just one term!”
Natalie M. Parent of Year 9 Student

This workshop is a good fit if your child...

  • is in Year 9 or Year 10
  • finds essays confusing or overwhelming
  • needs help with structure, evidence or analysis
  • benefits from clear examples and guided practice
  • wants a practical confidence boost before returning to school

Need deeper support?

The 2-hour workshop is the best place to start. Students who need more practice can then continue into the complete 10-Week Essay Writing Mastery Program.

Explore the 10-Week Program →
SCHOOL HOLIDAYS • YEARS 9–10

Give them a better way to write essays.

Two focused hours. Small-group support. A clear writing method they can take back to school.

✓ Workbook included ✓ Teacher-led ✓ Individual feedback ✓ Limited places
WORKSHOP PRICE $49 per student
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